Describe it.

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 Describe it. 

Pohutukawa is learning how to add detail in their writing. 
- Why do we need details in our writing? 
- What is an adjective/WOW words/ Describing word? 
- SMASH our writing. 

What an awesome writing session, we learnt about adding detail to our writing to make it interesting for the reader and to create a mental image while reading. We started by discussion what is an adjective, and it can make our writing more intersting. Students tworked in small group coming up with as many adjectives as they could describing some animal photos. We then used the adjectives to write some sentences. 
The students enjoyed this very much. (Photos of the students writing to come.) 





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  1. Fiona WaughAugust 19, 2021 at 1:29 PM

    Kia ora Pohutukawa,
    Your writing lesson sounds like it was really engaging. I can't wait to read your writing to see how you used adjectives to describe each animal. It would be neat if you posted a picture of the animal you were describing along with your writing so we can see how your adjectives fit with the image you were writing about!
    - Whaea Fi

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